Graeme's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gay Retarded Hobos]

Funny at first, but...

That was so pointless.
It wasn't even funny.
I understand your being good humored, and making fun of yourselves, which i appreciate good sense of humor. But honestly there had to be a better way to present it, with more effort.

LordZeebmork responds:

nah

[Clock Crew Shorts]

New feelings for CC rising!

Although you are not technically CC, it gives me hope for thier future. If they get something like this for every 15-20 spam movies, it would make up for it.

I love the idea of having an artwork section.
I found myself counting the B's, then when I realized you said what they are, I had to compare. I missed the Big B Is Watching you one only.
And OMG how does that Death Clock know what time it is!!!!

I like the backhand for the keys to the car. Rock, Paper Scissors solves nothing. haha. The gaming one was funny too. It was the last line of it that got me :D

Good work. Glad you added subtitles. It helps a lot.
Nice work.

Pelemus-McSoy responds:

Hooray! I'm giving influence!

The Dethklok Clock is magic and almighty, that's how! :3

Glad you liked it!

~Pelo

[Rarity]

Great minds thing alike

I was actually just thinking today, "i wish I had a flash for today, because i'll never be able to submit on February 29th again until 2012"
To bad I didn't have me own project finished. But i'm spending a fair amount of time on it, and didn't want to rush.
Sorry about my own life story there ^_^

The movie though, was rather confusing. Yet interesting in it's own way.
I like the use of the pixel tool, just because it doesn't appear to often in flashes.
I notice the paper towel was squeezed in again (nice)
I like how due to your two distinct styles, it was easy to spot where Nick's part would stop and Moro's would begin. And vise-versa.
Impressive given only a day of work.

MorrowDays responds:

Haha, its like, we did our own 2-hour time trial collab ^_^

I was thinking about you when I put the kitchen roll (as nick called it :D) in as the background, I'll use a new texture in upcoming things though because that one has been in several things, including three of my yeah right parts and this, and treekeepers :)

Good luck with all your stuff goat-man, cant wait to see your 2012 feb 29th submission in four years!

Moro

[SRM Transformers 2!]

Amazing!

That was so good!
I thought the first one was decent, but this one was truly amazing! You really went all out, and did it to the best of your ability (and it showed)

I love the transforming. It turned out really good. And i noticed you even squeezed it into the credits. (i would to if it took 3 hours) And i love the fact that Optimus even points out that he's the only one that tranformers. gold!

I love how you really took your reviews to heart. The added subtitles helped a lot!
I just can't think of what else to say! One more thing I noticed, is that didnt the first one end with Prime sarcastically saying, that if they were cancelled, what would replace them? dinosaurs?
I love that you bring it up again here.

Overall a great flash. Great work. SRM Transformers 3?

Battosai810 responds:

First off - glad you saw and liked the first one too! And thanks for noticing the transforming itself - that stuff is really hard!

The last one had a reference to them getting replaced by animals... not sure if I'd do a Beast Wars toon, not quite as close to my heart :)
!
And yeah, I listen to suggestions, and I took the good ones into the toon!

glad you liked it so much! and as for SRM Transformers 3 - who knows! I just might make it if this one does well ;)

thanks for the excellent review!

[Treekeepers]

Nice

Don't worry Morrow, I like your "artsy" style stuff.
Excellent choice of music. You didn't credit the author, so I'm not sure who it was. Possibly you. Haha
Did you draw the Tree and the Treekeepers? There were pretty cool.
And I love the plaid gun! High five for plaid gun! Totally turned the thing into a Treekeeper! Haha!
I always love your papertowel backgrounds too! They look so sweet!

So good work again!

MorrowDays responds:

Thanks! Yeah, I made the music in garageband, so there wasnt really any need to you know, have another credit! :P
I did draw all the stuff, I drew in that line style for a little while so I had a variety of drawings I could use to make it all match, so I chose those two, the tree and the treekeeper, and then the thing on the front of the big treecutter was also a scanned in drawing.
Have fun with the papertowel background, I hope it serves you well. :)

[Handy]

Oh my...

That totally weirded me out.
Maybe the music choice was a little to happy. But i guess it was kinda happy in the end.
There were a few that needed a some more in between frames so it wasn't so jumpy.
I would have liked if you rain effect was a little transparent too.
In the end, the flash was very different. I don't quit understand, but those abstract movie can be interesting still.
I like the message of the movie. It was just a little to out there for me.

PS. How did this movie place in the finals? I know you said top 10, but were did it place out of those 10?

MorrowDays responds:

your display pic totally weirds me out, I've been meaning to tell you :)

I hadnt thought of that, a transparent rain effect is a good idea. Keep in mind this WAS done a year ago when I wasnt as comfortable with flash as I am now, but thats sort of a lame excuse so whatever. In terms of the top ten thing, they show ten in a theatre at a big movie theatre for the festival, but they dont actually rank them 1-10 from there. They do have one overall award for each age group, which are grades 3-6, 7-9, and 10-12, but its really frustrating because this one kid wins it every single year because his parents have like, hollywood equipment and his dads in the business, hes won it 4 years in a row, haha.

[Half a collab]

I like it!

You have some really good FBF stuff in there, and seom fo it looked pretty neat. The only reason i docked you any point was because it had no music or sound fx.
I think if only it had a little music and sound, this thing would be awsome.

You definately have talent, we saw that in the Smoking Kills Collab too, if you just apply yourself to bigger projects, you could have some really great work.

PS. I love the thrusting dude that was just always kinda there. Haha

FlashKn1ght responds:

Thank you!

and yes, I do need bigger projamecs.
Actually, I'll let you ina on a little secret.
I'm planning one right now. Nothing "huge" and Its not started either... but it will be.

ooh yes... it WILL be...