Impressive
I love this song, but when i first heard this loop, I thought for sure you had just taken part of the song as your own.
I actually opened up my music and listened to the actualy song, and could here two differences.
1) The drums to sound a lot more 'drum machiney'
2) It is doesn't have the mixing board thing you here very faintly in the background of the real song
So, very good work. It seemed extremely authentic. So much so that i'm still not 100% sure, but I trust it's not stolen.
A fun tip for you, is the guitarist for lostprophets was just sitting around plucking at his guitar, when he liked what he heard and wrote it out. He wasn't even trying to write anything when he made this sweet thing.